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Frontier: 2170 Really nice and clean artwork, however I really question the use of footnotes in a comic.  It interferes with the flow of the comic first with readers not knowing what the phrases mean and subsequent search for the location of the notes.  Since they are simple phrases just have the characters use that simple phrase.   Good idea to avoid awkwardly crossing speech balloons.  This is a fault of mine so I'm doubly sensitive to it.

Battle of the Robofemoids The grey Gals are at work in their laboratory and an oblique reference to what Theda did before getting involved with Robofemoids.  This may be the last update for quite a while.

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Battle of the Robofemoids once again is quite amusing- I love the way the characters come ever so close to breaking that fourth wall by questioning the strength of the background- when to the reader it would appear so weak. The characters have strong personality and I love the fact that I can actually feel the mood when Theda has a quick, yet innocuous retort. Very good stuff!
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This week, Scareflare's investigation in Dueling Heroes (http://www.drunkduck.com/Dueling_Heroes ) explodes into a climax as inspiration strikes the hotheaded crimefighter. Time is running out as he finds himself not only outnumbered- but quite possibly outmatched by powers beyond his control.

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For Dueling Heroes: You manage to give a dynamic of action and intensity despite the extreme sketchiness of your design, and the emotions jump out at the reader immediately! Also love the last panel, it is really unexpected and fun. XD Well done! 

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Without Moonlight updates today with the two top dog SS officers in the Athens gestapo discussing results from the block.  

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Again, nice lineart and beautiful shading in MAG ISA. Keep it up!

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In this update of Frontier: 2170, let there be light…

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@mangaka2170 I read Frontier: 2170 before and again I really like the inking on it.  Keep it up!
 
Today in Mad Chicken Auto, Manny sees something really exciting..come see for yourself!

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Your art is very nice for all its simplicity, you're improving quite rapidly.
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In BASO Stavlov runs into a little trouble.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/
Also In lite bites we have a funeral service for a hedgehog.  really.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Lite_bites/

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@Baso - nice fight scene the past few pages.  And bottom panel… he could have just said what the f____ lol
@Lite Bites - sad story… of burying Sarah the hedgehog… :(
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5389015/
- Eman's floating head addresses the shady, shadowy elite…

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@kyupol I read this comic before and your art is nice as well as the story, and pretty nasty demons you got there.  Though, I read chapter one, but I saw the latest page and I gotta say the wireframe thing is pretty cool.
 
Today in Mad Chicken, a lot sorta happens though there's no diologue.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.

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Well, the artwork in your latest update of "The Adventures of Fred and Lassie" isn't bad.  You might want to work on your figure drawing (especially joints), and your writing could do with improvement, but I'd say you're off to a decent start.  Just remember to follow the rules and mention your own comic at the end, ideally with a link; most people won't want to have to go looking through your profile to find your comic.  Also, it isn't polite to multiple-post.
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In this update of Frontier:  2170, you know it's a bad sign when the traffic controller invokes national security…

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For Frontier: The use of greyscale really fits this comic, and I really liked the way the stuffy lines from control made me sneer along with making the fellow indignant. Well done! 


Without Moonlight updates today, with Eichel giving orders to Bohm about reprisals.  

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Without Moonlight shines once again- the villains don't just seem scary- they're vicious, vile and cruel. Great work with them- they have that level of cruelty, yet have not passed into that silly level of villainy where they lack realism. Villains are often my favorite part of comics, so I have to say once again, great job!
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In Dueling Heroes this week (Now with banner button!), we turn from Scareflare to Effex, to find out just what he's after- but has he taken a bite more than he can chew?

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Those wireframes are pretty cool, and the lineart and shading are top-notch as always.  Keep it up!
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In this update of Frontier:  2170:  Meanwhile, back in the present…

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As I read on in Frontier, the story gets more exciting with new events and people popping up.  I also noticed how you put lighting effects when a ship is active it sorta gives it a little realism.
 
Today in Mad Chicken, Manny is going to have some fun pretty soon.

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The artwork's much cleaner than the last time I checked, although I still advise inking in your lineart so you can get a better contrast with the paper.  Other than that, I suggest you pay more attention to your grammar; there are a few commas missing in your dialogue.
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In this update of Frontier:  2170, something's not right about this… 

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I really should read the archives of this one as cit's right up my street.  Good job on the vehicles.
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In B.A.S.O. Stavlov comes to and finds…   well read it and find out.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

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