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Posted at 3:06AM, Jun. 12, 2012

For Adventures of Johny American: A fun little comic strip series, nicely done! :D

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Brave Resistance updates today with patching up and discussion on the disposal of dead nazis.

Posted at 8:06AM, Jun. 12, 2012

Tantz Aerine wrote:
For Adventures of Johny American: A fun little comic strip series, nicely done! :D

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Brave Resistance updates today with patching up and discussion on the disposal of dead nazis.
Brave Resistance: The action and story is very epic. I love the gritty, bloody violence and your composition is very smooth and cinematic.
Also, just uploaded all 32 pages of my comic, The Misadventures of Dexter the Alien. You should check it out if you like comedy, sci-fi, and cartoon fun. There are plenty of twists and turns in the story and the pace will always keep you guessing.
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Misadventures_of_Dexter_the_Alien/5396469/

Posted at 8:06AM, Jun. 12, 2012

The Misadventures of Dexter the Alien is a great comic. I love how you throw in a little humor in every panel. The style is also good. And The "thing" just cracks me up. I would like to do a colored comic like yours sometime..keep it up mate ^^
Just added Mind Slash's page number #9. A mysterious new character appears. Who is it? Is Seno in danger once again? Stay tuned for the 10th page. It will come out today, and it will be the most exciting yet!
Mind Slash comic: http://www.drunkduck.com/Mind_Slash/

Posted at 2:06PM, Jun. 12, 2012

Looks pretty good, nice and simple. You might want to experiment with some more shading, though. Crosshatching might work best in that regard.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, the recap continues.

Posted at 11:06PM, Jun. 12, 2012

Frontier 2170 looks good- the buildup definitely looks like it's doing a great job of both recapping the events of the last chapter- but just as importantly- not being boring. As a writer, I am quite curious to see what makes it and doesn't. Looks like Chapter 6 will be a big one!
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This week in Dueling Heroes, it's time for JG to make things up to Megi- but can he stay out of trouble?

Posted at 9:06AM, Jun. 15, 2012

To be honest, your characters look a little awkward in their poses and movement. It might help to study how people move and practice drawing that until you become more proficient. The writing, on the other hand, is fun and serves its purpose well.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, there would be a lot of percussive booms on these pages, if it weren't for the fact that sound can't travel through a vacuum.

Posted at 8:06PM, Jun. 15, 2012

@Frontier 2170 I definitely like how the story is going now and I see some improvements in artwork as I read along. Good work!
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Today in Mad Chicken, Froggix gets his helping of some tasty larvae and bugs from Gerald for the first time.

Posted at 10:06AM, Jun. 16, 2012

For Mad Chicken: You got an interesting style, and that was a fun little strip!
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Without Moonlight updates today with the leader of the resistance making a scene.

Posted at 6:06AM, Jun. 17, 2012

Re: Without Moonlight
- Very nice dialog… that page and the previous few pages.
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MAG-ISA
- Claudita tells Eman not to worry about the bad guys coming after him. Instead, worry about…..
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5397215/

Posted at 12:06PM, Jun. 18, 2012

@kyupol Good story and concept, also the art looks really good with nice effects in between.
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Today in Mad Chicken, Froggix tastes a hamburger for the first time.

Posted at 12:06PM, Jun. 19, 2012

That last page was really cute, especially when Froggix jumped for joy like that, and then asked for more. The artwork has come a long way from how it started.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, "I'm only reading debris at their last known position…"

Posted at 9:06AM, Jun. 20, 2012

Looks like a really well-done serious moment! I definitely feel the tension and….even the fear felt there, underneath the outrage. Good work! It amplifies the events previously mentioned- if only by showing us that there is a significance to the flashy.
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This week on Dueling Heroes- JG and Tim Wizner in the same place- even out of costume- looks like sparks are gonna fly!

Posted at 12:06PM, Jun. 22, 2012

I think this one is one of your better pages. The composition, dialogue and pacing seem about right. I'd work a little more on some of the smaller details such as wrinkles and folds in fabric, and touch up a little on the curvature of the face, but those are really just nitpicky things.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, "Defense Condition One. Use of nuclear ordnance is authorized…"

Posted at 3:06PM, Jun. 22, 2012

@Frontier 2170 I see now that the Martians are at war with Earth. Mars is like the colonists were during the American Revolution and Earth is Britain. Yes I really like how the story is going now.
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Today in Mad Chicken, Gerald reveals a great source of the world's best burgers and fast food.

Posted at 10:06AM, Jun. 25, 2012

For Mad Chicken Auto: The expressions of awe and gluttony are priceless XD Nicely done!

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Without Moonlight updated yesterday with more Germans entering the scene, preparing to follow SS orders.

Posted at 12:06PM, Jun. 25, 2012

@Without Moonlight I praise the story for it being based on WWII; and those Nazis can be real demons but not to worry with a group of heroes who are willing to survive in a harsh world and to fight back against the Nazis. I also praise the artwork of the pages I mean it's really good! Keep it up!
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Today in Mad Chicken, the story now shifts back to Tom and Manny.

Posted at 8:06PM, Jun. 25, 2012

Re: MAD CHICKEN AUTO
- lmao cute last few pages. Is that hamburger made up of compacted flies? lol
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5398229/
- Claudita challenges Eman to arm wrestling.

Posted at 9:06AM, Jun. 26, 2012

As always, MAG-ISA's artwork is fantastic, and I liked the shift from seriousness to comedy in both tone and art style.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, "We are under attack by Martian warships…"

Posted at 1:06AM, Jun. 28, 2012

Frontier 2170: I like what I am seeing here. I like the sharp lines, the use of muted colour in space. I like it a lot!
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The Chronicles of Wyrden updates today and well it's a Kalon and Silver tag-team combo that's going to send the poor guy to Davey Jones Locker.

Posted at 9:06AM, Jun. 29, 2012

Wow, fantastic page altogether! Definitely a great action scene. I imagine that the action poses took a bit to get right- cos they look spectacular! Wow. I also rather like that your depiction of blood is neither tepid nor wonton.
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This week on Dueling Heroes, seems like everything is going smoothly at dinner, but Megi's suspicions get riled up again!

Posted at 10:06AM, Jun. 29, 2012

Well, it certainly looks like the story's building up to something. Nice cliffhanger ending, by the way.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, boom. Boom-boom. Boom-boom-boom, boom-boom-boom, boom.

Posted at 11:06AM, Jun. 29, 2012

@Frontier 2170 The story seems to be heating up with Judgement Day and all. I wonder if the story is reaching its climax.
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Today in Mad Chicken, Tom's mom doesn't seem too pleased with him coming home late.

Posted at 6:06PM, Jun. 30, 2012

@Mad Chicken Auto - awww… thats not an animal, mom. Thats my friend.
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5398864/
- Claudita loses in arm wrestling.

Posted at 9:07AM, Jul. 1, 2012

MAG-ISA: "however"s can be a pretty dangerous thing, specially when person saying it is afraid of destroying you. some arm wrestling matches are better left unwrestled! she'll tear yer arm off,dude!
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PUTRID MEAT updates with Bones and his crew making contact with the first civilization they've found since leaving Exis' compound.
http://www.drunkduck.com/PUTRID_MEAT/5399184/

Posted at 3:07PM, Jul. 2, 2012

@Putrid Meat I'm always up for some dark humor, but I gotta say this comic has a lot of it. While reading, you can't tell what's going to happen next and the artwork pretty awesome. Keep it up!
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Today in Mad Chicken, it seems Tom's mom likes some dark humor herself.