… this thing will be 452 + 22 pages of additional art, that's roughly 3.5 times longer than the previous thing. Moments like that I really wish I could just throw some serious cash at a good artist, heh.
If the length makes you dread doing it, maybe a useful exercise would be to go through and tighten it up as much as possible? :] It sounds like you've been writing this really quickly, but I think with longer works, putting it aside for a while and editing it later, or even having someone else look at it critically, can be useful to cut out a lot of things that aren't really needed, make plot elements more dense, etc…. Even if you can only cut out 20 pages, how many hours of work later would that save you?
But the one girl I was going for, pretty much slapped me in the face. Not literally, mind you. But I was being nice, and she wasn't at school one day, so I messaged her asking what was wrong. And she didn't even bother to respond. Now, this wouldn't have upset me so much, but this shit happens all the time. I'm sorry for the language, I'm just so sick of everything.
It doesn't help that I pretty much already gave up on the thing. But this pretty much marks it. I'm done with wasting my time chasing after girls that I know I have no chance with. Also, everybody was like, "Oh, you have a chance." "She's not out of your league." Ha.
I'm sorry about that. I went through a break up recently and all I can say is try to keep positive. Also, you're obviously too much of a sexy beast for her. Am-I-right??? *Highfives*
It's alright, man. I had a few friends (both girls) that helped me. They pretty much made me realize that I don't need her, because apparently I can do better. I think so too. She's probably into those incredibly skinny guys. The emo ones, that is. I don't think she could handle me. Haha.
Also, about the picture. Why did they bother to skip the inking step? I really hope that isn't pro-stuff, because the pencils look terrible on the colors (colors are nice, though)
Also, about the picture. Why did they bother to skip the inking step? I really hope that isn't pro-stuff, because the pencils look terrible on the colors (colors are nice, though)
It's the other way around, the colors were all wrong for the pencils which were very nice-check the rest of his DA :). Pencils tend to need earthy natural tones and very little use of an overlay layer to work, Cho and sonia oback rock this and so the recent Conan too.
TDK should have won best movie during the MTV Movie Awards instead of Twilight. Twilight sucks. Any self-respecting reader/science fiction/fantasy fan should know that.
Have you seen Twilight?
If not, don't you DARE badmouth it.
Some people have no respect for good art.
Trolling? Are you aware of how many fangirls make posts exactly like this? It's everywhere. God help us because no one else will. :)
By the way I believe that humorman really is a wall that dictates its posts to an insane man in a cheap hotel room somewhere.
You know with H1N1 I'm actually beginning to agree with kyupol. So few cases and deaths and it's a pandemic? Thousands are dying of other strains of flu and in car accidents. I say we check everyone over who drive as thoroughly as we're checking for H1N1. You can't get in the car without a complete examination. Anyone anywhere with the sniffles, lock them up!
How about taking care of malaria and getting rid of those mosquitoes? Enforcing rigid rules about hygiene to stop typhus, etc? Nah, let's go nuts over the sniffles. The great majority of people dying are those likely to die of any strain of the flu!
Yellow smoke would most likely be mustard gas. Pretty nasty as only complete protection of any and all exposed skin works and it burns the lungs nicely and it lingers. Left over Pockets from WWI are still found in Belgium and France. Even all these years later it is still in the chemical arsenel. I used to asssit with the No body Cares (NBC) training when I was in the army. I keep seeing US Army pro-masks for sale at garage sales… but then pissing into a handkerchief works in a pinch.
Mustard gas is nasty, but the real reason countries agreed to give it up in war (even though the US, Russia, France UK, Israel etc still keep some) was that it's not much use in war. Same with all the other bio and nerve gas weapons. They're deadly, but deadly to your own side too.
That's why no one did the same thing with nukes. They're FAR more effective. Why renounce a weapon that actually works? ;) Besides, the only reason people are worried about terrorists using them is because that's the only scenario where their use makes tactical sense, and even then the challenges in employing it in a truly destructive way are huge.
It's why the case for war in Iraq was not just silly because they didn't HAVE the chemical weapons, but they most likley wouldn't have used them even if they did. -_-
… this thing will be 452 + 22 pages of additional art, that's roughly 3.5 times longer than the previous thing. Moments like that I really wish I could just throw some serious cash at a good artist, heh.
If the length makes you dread doing it, maybe a useful exercise would be to go through and tighten it up as much as possible? :] It sounds like you've been writing this really quickly, but I think with longer works, putting it aside for a while and editing it later, or even having someone else look at it critically, can be useful to cut out a lot of things that aren't really needed, make plot elements more dense, etc…. Even if you can only cut out 20 pages, how many hours of work later would that save you?
Well, I went through the script, found no glaring plot holes… sent it off to a friend who's been slowly reading through it and so far found nothing either :)
The problem with any kind of shortening is that I'd have to cut two pages at a time, otherwise my pageturns (the ones I got right that is) would stop working. Also, I write the best when I write fast :D …and any dialogue problems will be fixed, as usual, during the lettering.
As for cutting things out… I don't think there's anything that needs to be cut out. I put down scenes that either further the plot or give more "layers" to the characters. So any kind of cuts would lead to tons of exposition instead.
Now, there might be things there that don't work visually, but I won't see that until I try to draw them. And any kind of editing based on what I think I can or can not draw would lead to me cutting out too much… like, first thing I'd cut out all the horses as I never drew them, thus having to rework several scenes where they appear.
Of course, I might be totally wrong and the whole thing will fall apart when read as a finished book :D
I have mustard gas nightmares; plague nightmares, too. I used to have "floods of biblical proportion" dreams, but oddly enough that stopped after Katrina. I guess my brain was like, "Well, prophesy fulfilled! We can cross that one off the list now!" huh!?
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I did a bunch of packing yesterday. Got most of my clothes, all of my junk and books, and a lot of art supplies boxed up. Next is my record collection and turntable, cds, and massive jewelry collection. Sheesh. Least I got some beers left. As I've said before- can't do that shit sober.
I'm excited to go home, and see my as of yet unseen apartment. Its like, two blocks away from one of my favorite bars, a couple blocks away from the Carnival parade route, the grocery, and the streetcar line. So pretty much ideal. Got a back yard and driveway, too. And we've got the whole bottom floor for $850/month, which is about what a 2 bedroom in Uptown cost before the hurricane. Could be a dump, though. And the landlord is insane. Eh, who cares. It will be weird not to live in my old neighborhood, though. But that's only a 15 minute bike ride away, too. :)
Well hey, apparently I'm super productive when my brain is shrivelling from sleep deprivation. It's a shame that what I'm actually super producing is crap and as soon as I'm in my right mind again I'll delete it all and curl up weeping in a corner somewhere.
now Custard, are you saying that as in "he's better then you, and you cant ever hope to aspire to him becuase he's super amazing!!!"
or are you saing "humorman sucks cow tit, but you'll still never hope to be as good as he is."
Neither, I'm saying that 'trying to have fun' with Humorman tends to lead to the forum becoming clogged with pointless bickering, which is exactly what he wants to happen.
I would hate mustard gas but only because I hate mustard.
Actually I had a dream last night that I still remember. Something about people (6-8) being stuck on a non-functioning freight ship out in a cold part of the ocean, and after one guy died from starvation, the others decided that one of them would have to be killed and eaten. The best person to kill and cut up someone was the doctor, but since no one was willing to be killed, they told the doctor to kill and cut up and cook himself for them. So they are all sitting around at dinner to warm juicy leg steaks and halfway through the meal, the mail arrives (I dunno) and there is a letter from the doctor telling them that he cut up and cooked the starved guy instead and swam for shore, and that they were morons.
I knew that when I dropped my car off for an alignment this morning the dealers would find about $300 worth of other problems and swear to me on their mother's graves that it was a necessary thing to get fixed. Well, I was wrong. They found $800 worth. Busted ball joints and some other shit. I was just saving up money to buy a Walther P-22 and now they want me to spend an entire paycheck on this crap?
To make things even better, now they get to charge me an extra hour of labor. They didn't say so over the phone, but I know those bastards will. No wonder Andy (friend of mine) quit because he hated how corrupt these guys have become.
"Just change the tire," was all I could bring myself to say on the phone, because the busted ball joint misaligned the car and that made it ride heavy on said tire, which blew out a belt. Whatever. I knew I could just take the damn thing to Wal-mart and get a tire without getting charged an extra $50 for labor. Hell, if wal-mart still did alignments, I wouldn't have this problem. They'd have fixed the problem, lied to me and sent me home. Or maybe wal-mart didn't. SOME shop around here used to but they went out of business and now the only people I can find are the dealer and a "Leatherworks and alignment" shop which is across the street from the library and equidistant between the projects and the schools.
Either way, I still have to get the brake pads replaced. Which, of course, I'm sure they'll mention in a few minutes when they call back.
DAMN YOU Ford/Lincoln/Mercury/Toyota dealership! DAMN YOU TO HELL AND BEYOND!
Whew. Got the linework for my cover done. It's a bit… boring, honestly. But whatever- I'm up against a rapidly approaching deadline. Blech. I hate doin' covers- color work is not my specialty. :gem:
Now I've got to go pay Kinko's to scan a metric crapload of stuff… I hate it, because often they do a shoddy job. I like to be able to do it myself, on account of different pages need to be scanned with different setting- anywhere from b & w to 16-bit greyscale. Grrrr. And half the time they ignore me and scan it at 600 dpi (why!?) and my computer freezes up when I try to edit a file that size. :mad:
Decided to layout the entire chapter in thumbnails before starting to actually draw (rather than do it on the go before I draw the pages). So I guess the first actual pages will happen tomorrow…
Decided to layout the entire chapter in thumbnails before starting to actually draw (rather than do it on the go before I draw the pages). So I guess the first actual pages will happen tomorrow…
Yeah, you definitely want to do that. I always uh…free-balled it (for lack of a better term) when I drew pages. I never really bothered to do proper/decent thumbnails.
This time around, I'm most definitely going to. Because I hate crying in a corner for 5 hours, rocking back and forth, figuring out how I want to lay my panels out. The 5 hours I spent crying, I could have spent drawing. :P
Sheesh. Least I got some beers left. As I've said before- can't do that shit sober.
I would imagine it would be harder to do that whilst being drunk. Wouldn't you stumble around a bunch, and maybe drop things? Or maybe, your just a really good drunk? ;)
Mustard gas is nasty
I think every kind of gas is nasty. But I suppose, to each his own. :P
It's the other way around, the colors were all wrong for the pencils which were very nice-check the rest of his DA . Pencils tend to need earthy natural tones and very little use of an overlay layer to work, Cho and sonia oback rock this and so the recent Conan too.
I looked at the pencils, and they look great. But the pencils on the colors look terrible. Is that what you mean? The colors looked right to me, it's just maybe how they darkened them? I dunno. I can't really tell. Hahaha.
And today was the last day of school! Now I have more time to draw and work out! Wooooooooooo!
Sheesh. Least I got some beers left. As I've said before- can't do that shit sober.
I would imagine it would be harder to do that whilst being drunk. Wouldn't you stumble around a bunch, and maybe drop things? Or maybe, your just a really good drunk? ;)
My sweet child, I am a professional drunk.
Also, I can't afford enough beer to get me drunk. Just enough to stay not sober. ;)
Also, I can't afford enough beer to get me drunk. Just enough to stay not sober. ;)
Ah, gotta love Louisianians.
Heh. Tell me ya know what a "cajun cooler" is… or maybe that's just a New Orleans thing…
Well, my Dad's folks are from Lafayette, and they don't mix drinks there, they just open the hard stuff and drink. Then play cards, and argue and HE'S GOT A KNIFE!! Chairs get thrown, lawn ornaments get turned into melee weapons and someone gets a rock through the window. Best family reunion ever.
I would hate mustard gas but only because I hate mustard.
Actually I had a dream last night that I still remember. Something about people (6-8) being stuck on a non-functioning freight ship out in a cold part of the ocean, and after one guy died from starvation, the others decided that one of them would have to be killed and eaten. The best person to kill and cut up someone was the doctor, but since no one was willing to be killed, they told the doctor to kill and cut up and cook himself for them. So they are all sitting around at dinner to warm juicy leg steaks and halfway through the meal, the mail arrives (I dunno) and there is a letter from the doctor telling them that he cut up and cooked the starved guy instead and swam for shore, and that they were morons.
Okay, I have to say that this dream doesn't make any logical sense. First of all, meat from humans has very little nutritional value, so even if they did resort to cannibalism, they still wouldn't survive for long. Secondly, why would killing the doctor, the most qualified person to make sure these people stay alive, be the best option? Also, why do these people expect the doctor to cook himself? Once he's dead, he cant really do much of anything else, let alone cook. Plus, why would the doctor write a note explaining that he didn't cook himself. It's not like they needed to find out.
Decided to layout the entire chapter in thumbnails before starting to actually draw (rather than do it on the go before I draw the pages). So I guess the first actual pages will happen tomorrow…
Yeah, you definitely want to do that. I always uh…free-balled it (for lack of a better term) when I drew pages. I never really bothered to do proper/decent thumbnails.
This time around, I'm most definitely going to. Because I hate crying in a corner for 5 hours, rocking back and forth, figuring out how I want to lay my panels out. The 5 hours I spent crying, I could have spent drawing. :P
Oh, no worries there, I can layout a page pretty quickly (and I'm making this one easy forme cause I'll be sticking to a 6 square panels grid half of the time with some variations wherever some panels needs more/less space). Still, it should make things easier to have an entire chapter in thumbnails sitting in front of me.
I'm also writing out the dialogue next to them so that when I'm drawing the actual pages, I can see how much space I need to leave for the text (so it's taking extra long as I need to write slowly for the text to be readable).
Also, I can't afford enough beer to get me drunk. Just enough to stay not sober. ;)
Ah, gotta love Louisianians.
Heh. Tell me ya know what a "cajun cooler" is… or maybe that's just a New Orleans thing…
Well, my Dad's folks are from Lafayette, and they don't mix drinks there, they just open the hard stuff and drink. Then play cards, and argue and HE'S GOT A KNIFE!! Chairs get thrown, lawn ornaments get turned into melee weapons and someone gets a rock through the window. Best family reunion ever.
In short yes, but I've never had one.
Ew, mixed drinks! That's against my religion. ;) No, it's just a plastic grocery sack with ice in it, that you put your six pack in. — Haha, that's exactly right! What's that one card game they play- I can't remember the name- but it's specific to SE Louisiana, and always results in violence. Like, legendarily. lol!
I think you're taking to literal an approach, whilst the dream is clearly an allegory of Skoolmunkee's life here in the UK:
Firstly, they're trapped on a non functioning place in a cold part of the ocean, a metaphor for our country if ever I heard one, and the person they wish to consume is the one most likely to be of any use, despite the fact that they already have a corpse handy - irony, tradgedy, the elements of the british psyche are all there.
Also note that the mail arrives at an absurd destination with typically annoying timing: obviously Skool' is painfully familiar with our postal system. With one bound of course, our hero the doctor is free, leaving the morons to feast on third rate steak - here our admin' is looking forward to the day when she abandons our dead ship of irony and returns to the U.S. for a decent lunch.
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